Second Draft

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gY30jrDCJNQ&feature=relmfu

After recieving valuable feedback we had decided to go back and film which entailed using more various camera shots and valuable editing in order to make the film look much better. However there was still continuity within the video which still had to be changed such as the voice over as the background within filming had disrupted this. The feedback given was to voice over the parts that were disrputed, we had also changed the soundtrack to the Netsky - The Magic Russian Bottle song which had worked much better. And in relation to the storyboard and script we had to develop some changes within this to ensure this had worked much better this was also relating to feedback that was given, so in this case me and Tyler had switched positions and the ending had involved me and Evano instead.